My Mentorship Story: How I Got My Writing Career On Track

A lot of people have gone further than they thought they could because
someone else thought they could. (Unknown)

I’ve been away from this blog for a while because I’ve been flooded with work ever since I opened up shop as a freelance editor (which is great!). I knew I’d enjoy the actual editing part of it, but I’ve discovered that I also love connecting one-on-one with my author-clients. I underestimated how rewarding and inspiring it is to help people chase their dreams.

But I do miss this blog; I miss being part of a community. It wasn’t until I started freelancing that I realized how difficult it is for writers to find support groups. Far too many writers have no one to turn to for help or guidance, which is shocking to me, especially considering the numbers.

A Shortage of Support

Over 80 percent of Americans want to write a book.

That’s 250 million people, in the US alone. You’d think, then, that writers would have the biggest support group in the world!

In fact, support groups have historically been the driving force behind all of the arts. Artists in the past would find mentors to show them the ropes, then the artists would acquire patrons to support their work, and then these artists would become mentors themselves. A miniature circle of life.

But a lot has changed since the times of da Vinci.

The Devaluation of Mentors

Nowadays, our technology-obsessed culture has replaced human interaction with tweets and blogs and online courses and self-help books. But here’s what I’ve learned:

One good mentor is worth all those combined—a hundred fold.

My Mentorship Story

I started this blog four years ago. For the first two years, I felt like all my efforts were futile, like I was pushing against a brick wall, until one day I wrote a blog post where I broke down Rowling’s outline for Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix and compared it to Stuart Horwitz’s methods in his book Blueprint Your Bestseller. Within a few months, Stuart contacted me and asked if I’d like to coauthor a chapter for his second book, Book Architecture. Um, yes!

Over the next year Stuart and I emailed back and forth as we developed our chapter, which went so well that I also beta read and offered feedback for the rest of his manuscript. Even though I was excited when Book Architecture finally hit the shelves, I was also sad for the experience to end—I had learned and grown more in that one year than the past two years of blogging combined.

That’s why I felt incredibly lucky when Stuart contacted me yet again and offered me an internship, a first for him and his book editing firm, Book Architecture. I delved into everything:

  • drawing up contracts,
  • creating style sheets, editorial letters, and agent databases,
  • walking through the entire self-publishing process,
  • and editing on all levels—developmental, line, and copy.

I also was a beta reader for Stuart’s third and final writing book, Finish Your Book in Three Drafts: How to Write a Book, Revise a Book, and Complete a Book While You Still Love It.

As the year progressed and we found our footing, my internship morphed into a mentorship. Unfortunately, not all internships are also mentorships. In an internship, you’re simply learning “stuff,” a checklist. But in a mentorship, someone is getting to know you one-on-one and addressing your unique weaknesses, strengths, knowledge, experiences, and goals.

Along with all of the valuable “stuff” I learned, Stuart also set aside time for mentor talks. The talks revolved around any questions I had about the editing business as well as advice from him based on questions I should have asked but didn’t know enough yet to ask them.

I’d say that I learned more in the one year of my mentorship than I could have learned on my own in five years (or more). Which is why a mentor is the “secret” to success—although it’s not much of a secret. I have not come across a single success story where the individual did not receive some form of mentoring along the way.

Examples of Modern-Day Mentors

Lena Dunham was mentored by the late Nora Ephron. In a beautifully written piece in the New Yorker, Dunham memorialized Ephron:

[Nora] explained how to interact with a film composer (“Just say what you’re hearing and what you want to hear”) and what to do if someone screamed at you on the telephone (“Just nod, hang up, and decide you will never allow anyone to speak to you that way again”). She called bullshit on a whole host of things, too: donuts served in fancy restaurants; photo shoots in which female directors are asked to all stand in a cluster wearing mustaches; the idea that one’s writing isn’t fiction if it borrows from one’s life.

Oprah was mentored by Barbara Walters. In an interview with Walters, Oprah said, “Had there not been you, there never would have been me.”

Oprah was also mentored by Maya Angelou. At Angelou’s funeral, Oprah gave a eulogy and said, “I think mentors are important . . . Nobody makes it alone. Nobody has made it alone.

Usher has frequently spoken about mentoring Justin Bieber. In an interview with Pharell Williams, Usher said:

Success has a million fathers. Failure is an orphan. Tweet This

How to Find Your Own Mentor

1. Never stop chasing your dreams.

Jon Hamm didn’t get a single acting gig for the first three years after moving to Hollywood. Not surprisingly, his talent agency dropped him. Hamm gave himself five years to get his acting career on track; if nothing happened, he’d call it quits. He said, “I knew a lot of 40-year-old waiters and I didn’t want to be one of those.” In the nick of time, he landed his first big Hollywood movie, We Were Soldiers, and he was able to quit waiting tables. A few years later, he became the infamous Don Draper of “Mad Men,” which was voted the seventh best-written TV series of all time.

Paula Hawkins has a similar story. Hawkins got her start in the book industry when she wrote a guide to finance. The publishing house that took on the guide then asked Hawkins to write some romance novels under the pen name Amy Silver. Hawkins said she never felt comfortable with the genre and realized that she wanted to write suspense and psychological thrillers. When her fourth romance novel flopped, she decided to try writing one last time before giving it up for good. The result was the fastest-selling hardcover ever recorded—The Girl on the Train.

  • What if Jon Hamm had given himself only four years to become an actor instead of five?
  • What if Hawkins’ first suspense book had been a failure and her second had been Girl on the Train?
  • What if I had decided to give up blogging after a year because I thought it wasn’t going anywhere?

Jon Hamm and Paula Hawkins were lucky enough to have happy endings, but how many other Hamms and Hawkins are out there who didn’t get their happy ending?

How many people in history have given themselves a deadline, not knowing that success had been waiting just beyond it?

The mindset of “all or nothing” is neither healthy nor helpful. I realize we all must face reality—we have families, jobs, bills—but facing reality does not mean that you have to give up on your dreams.

Maybe you have to figure out a different approach or perhaps you have to go at a slower pace than you’d like, but at least you’re still in pursuit. Remember, if you’re not actively trying to help yourself, you have very little chance of finding someone who will want to help either. As Stuart says in Finish Your Book in Three Drafts:

If you look at the subset circle of people who didn’t make it, the entire subset of people who quit is contained within that.

2. Keep an open mind as to whom your mentor may be.

I should qualify my earlier statement and say that the secret to success is not having a mentor but having the right mentor. Luckily, the “right” mentor can come in all shapes and sizes. Don’t limit yourself by thinking that your mentor has to have higher credentials than you or has to be more successful than you or even has to be in the same field as you.

Former US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice said, “Here’s an important warning: you don’t have to have mentors who look like you. Had I been waiting for a black, female Soviet specialist mentor, I would still be waiting. Most of my mentors have been old white men, because they were the ones who dominated my field.”

And the CEO of General Motors, Mary Barra, said, “Don’t always look high when creating your mentor network. Colleagues have great insights about you that you may have overlooked.”

Oprah Winfrey, Maya Angelou, John Glenn, and Walter Cronkite all had mentors who were either high school or elementary teachers.

One of Colin Powell’s greatest mentors was his father. Ansel Adams also credited his own father and so did Cal Ripken, Jr., who said:

I don’t know what value you can place on [a mentor], but the right words spoken at the right time from a person that’s been through it before can make all the difference.

More than anything else, a successful mentorship is founded on mutual respect and admiration. One of Steven Spielberg’s mentors was George Lucas. Spielberg has himself mentored many people, including J. J. Abram. Spielberg said, “The delicate balance of mentoring someone is not creating them in your own image, but giving them the opportunity to create themselves.”

Stuart and I are very different people who are at very different points in our lives. We live over 1,400 miles apart and have never even met. But the mentorship has been successful. I attribute our success to the fact that we not only respect our differences but also capitalize on them—we treat them as assets rather than as hindrances.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, who mentored Henry David Thoreau, summed it up best when he said:

What I need is someone who can make me do what I can. Tweet This

3. Look first for mentorship moments. Then let them progress naturally.

A mentorship is not something you can force. You can’t walk around asking people to mentor you—that’s like asking people to be your best friend. It has to be a natural process, evolving over time.

Robert Herjavec, TV star of “Shark Tank,” wrote:

As you consider mentorship, I encourage you to take the pressure off.

Stop the “will you be my mentor?” emails and start being present to embrace the learning opportunities all around you. Ask your colleagues and executive team members for their points of view. Seek advice from your direct leader or leader once removed.

Start having conversations and soaking in the mentorship moments.

Three years ago when Stuart contacted me to coauthor a chapter, I could never have guessed that I’d end up where I am today with an editing business of my own. All I was focused on then was embracing the opportunity and learning as much from it as I could. Don’t be concerned if a mentorship moment doesn’t turn into a full-blown mentorship.

Herjavec also wrote:

When I consider mentorship, I see it as a series of moments with key individuals over the course of my career. Have I always had one individual guide me along the way? No, that wasn’t my experience. But there are multiple people that have offered advice or a sounding board along the way . . .

Mary Barra, CEO of General Motors, agrees with Herjavec:

Throughout my career, I’ve benefited greatly from the wisdom and experiences of mentors. Some executives credit one or two key people for coaching them to success, but I believe effective mentoring takes a network.

Different people see different aspects of us as we progress in our careers and handle the opportunities and challenges along the way.

All you can do is sieze mentorship moments. Financial advisor Suze Orman, who mentors personal trainer Jillian Michaels, said:

Everyone in life can be your mentor whether they know it or not. Tweet This

4. Ask not what your mentor can do for you, but what you can do for your mentor.

The thing to remember about mentorships is:


Stuart, for example, has nearly twenty years of experience as an editor. He has written for Writer’s Digest; his book Blueprint Your Bestseller was named one of 2013’s best writing books by The Writer magazine; and his clients are bestselling authors and have appeared on shows like “The Today Show,” “The Tonight Show,” and “Oprah.”

Stuart mentors me as a favor, not out of necessity. And even though he certainly had no reason to, he has always treated me like an equal. Not once during my internship did he give me a “go get the coffee” job. That’s not to say that all of my work has been enlightening and rewarding and inspiring—every job has its drudgery—but a mentor shows you how to most effectively and efficiently tackle the drudgery.

In the end, you only get as much out of a mentorship as you put into it. A mentor’s job is not necessarily to make your road any easier. A mentor’s job is to show you that the road is worth taking.

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15 thoughts on “My Mentorship Story: How I Got My Writing Career On Track

  1. I love this post! I wrote my first novel with so much mentorship and support and I wasn’t able to have that again while I wrote my second novel. The experience was vastly different and felt like such an uphill battle without those mentors in my life.


  2. Reblogged this on Writing of Whitney Danielle and commented:
    Hey Everyone,

    I read this post and thought it might be good for people to read through. Good mentors are so helpful. I’m grateful for the mentors that I have had in my life and know that I wouldn’t be where I am in my writing if I hadn’t had that help. I hope you all enjoy this post like I did.


  3. So great to see you back blogging again. I discovered this blog last year and kept checking back while I consumed your articles voraciously – and here we are again!

    Welcome back


  4. Hi there

    I received a subscription email in my inbox today that really resonated with me as I am quite a private person and just wanted to stop by and say hello and congratulations on your recent changes. I’ve been following your blog for a while now and look forward to your new posts and advice!


    1. LJ—It’s always scary making a change, trying something new, wondering if other people will understand; so thank you for taking the time to let me know that you “get it.”


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